For generations the Inquisition has stood between humanity and the forces of darkness. It has failed.
Thanquil Darkheart is a witch hunter for the Inquisition, on a holy crusade to rid the world of heresy. He’s also something else... expendable. When the God Emperor gives Thanquil an impossible task, he knows he has no choice but to venture deep into the Wilds to hunt down a fallen Inquisitor.
Even the best swordswoman is one bad day away from a corpse. It’s a lesson Blademaster Jezzet Vel’urn isn’t keen to learn. Chased into the Wilds by a vengeful warlord, Jezzet makes it to the free city of Chade. But instead of sanctuary all she finds are more enemies from her past.
The Black Thorn is a cheat, a thief, a murderer and worse. He’s best known for the killing of several Inquisitors and every town in the Wilds has a WANTED poster with his name on it. Thorn knows it’s often best to lie low and let the dust settle, but some jobs pay too well to pass up.
As their fates converge, Jezzet, Thanquil, and the Black Thorn will need to forge an uneasy alliance in order to face the truth the Inquisition has been hiding from them all.
A dark epic fantasy full of zealous witch hunters, roving warlords, dark magic, and demons. Perfect for fans of Joe Abercrombie and Brent Weeks.
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“Burn them all!”
Thanquil tried to suppress the sigh that snuck up on him. He failed.
“Something to say, Arbiter Darkheart?”
“No, Arbiter Prin,” Thanquil said with a smile. The lanky Arbiter Prin glared back at him with hollow eyes. He was a dangerous man to be on the wrong side of, and Thanquil had no intentions of making yet another enemy within the Inquisition. “Only, I’m not sure it’s really necessary to burn them.” The words spilled from Thanquil’s mouth before he had a chance to stop them.
Prin’s face contorted with rage, a nasty snarl forming on his thin lips, and beads of sweat standing out on his forehead. He took a couple of steps forward and Thanquil found himself far too close to Prin for comfort. The man was even uglier up close.
“Are you in charge here, Arbiter Darkheart?” Hot, sour breath blasted Thanquil in the face with each word and wide, angry eyes bore into his own.
“No, Arbiter Prin,” Thanquil replied, looking down, looking to the side, looking anywhere but at the ageing Arbiter now invading his personal space.
“Why are you here?” Prin’s voice was deep, too deep for such a skinny man.
“Just passing through on my way to Sarth.” Thanquil’s own voice sounded shaky next to Prin’s. “Thought I’d help out seeing as how—”
“Do I look like I need help, Arbiter Darkheart?” Hot, sour breath again with a strange hint of vanilla.
Thanquil looked at the gathered crowd; scared faces glanced back and then dropped their eyes to the ground, not wanting to catch an Arbiter’s attention. Soldiers, some with swords, others with pikes but all wearing the blue-black of Sarth on their uniforms. Then there was the family tied to stakes in the centre of the town square. A mother and father, both plain-looking. The mother cried, the father looked both angry and scared but no tears there. A daughter, just reaching her womanhood, was shrieking apologies for something or other and crying out a name over and over; could have been Arcus, but Thanquil couldn’t tell and didn’t care. The fourth member of the family was a small lad, no more than five years old. The boy looked more confused than scared.
Prin followed Thanquil’s gaze and snorted. “What’s the matter, Darkheart? Brings back memories?”
Thanquil put on his very best menacing face and stared a hole through the man in front of him. “Yes, Arbiter Prin, you do look like you need help. But not any of the sort I can give.” He tapped his head with a single finger to drive the insult home. It was a petty and a foolish thing to say, Thanquil knew, but it felt damned good saying it.
Arbiter Prin snorted again, then turned around and stalked towards the bound family. Thanquil felt like sighing with relief, but he held it in this time. No use arguing any further, despite the fact that burning the family alive was more than extreme. A simple beheading would have served the purpose just as well and wouldn’t have involved the stench of burning flesh which, Thanquil knew, was damned hard to wash out of clothing.
Thanquil dug his hands into the pockets of his dirty, brown coat and resigned himself to watching a burning. He wasn’t going to give Prin the satisfaction of seeing him leave before it was done.
There was something in his right pocket. Something metal, smaller than a coin but thicker and with stub coming out of the flat side. Thanquil had no idea where it had come from, no idea who he’d stolen it from or when or even where. He had a habit of finding small objects in his pockets. This one seemed to have some sort of engraving on it. He ran a calloused finger across it and recognised the design: a sword in the middle with a sun above it and a single ray of light shining down. It was a button from an Arbiter’s coat. Thanquil looked down at his own brown coat with all of its buckles, buttons, and pockets. All eight buttons were still attached. He looked over towards Arbiter Prin, the exact same coat though muddied and a little longer. Two buttons missing. Thanquil grinned, he wasn’t about to give the button back. Small victories, Inquisitor Heron had once told him, can defeat even the largest of men, and Arbiter Prin wasn’t that large.
Thanquil removed his hands from his pockets, and then ran them through his mess of greasy hair. It was getting long again, almost down past his ears, and starting to curl. Then he rubbed at the stubble on his chin, which was beginning to verge on being a beard. He’d need to shave soon. Then he started cracking his knuckles one by one. If Prin was going to burn them the least he could do was get on with it.
“Bloody witch hunters!” someone screamed from the crowd.
Prin’s head snapped around looking for the source of the voice, his hollow eyes bulging from dark sockets, his lips curling up into a horrific sneer.
“Damn,” Thanquil sighed out, then held up a placating hand towards Prin. “You just get on with your burning. I’ll deal with the disgruntled masses.”
Arbiter Prin turned away and Thanquil walked towards the crowd, the soldiers with their pikes and dirty uniforms stood aside to let him pass.
“Which one of you was it?” Thanquil asked to the crowd.
“Me,” said an older man. Grey hair dropped in clumps around his weather-beaten face. He looked surprised that he had owned up to it. There were tears in his eyes.
“You know them?” Thanquil asked again. He didn’t like asking questions.
“That’s my boy an’ his family. They done nothing wrong.”
“Yes they have,” Thanquil stated in a firm voice. “They wouldn’t be up there if they were innocent. Heresy comes in all shapes and sizes. They have been questioned and they have been found guilty and they will suffer the consequences for their evil.”
“You’re all the same you witch hunters. You don’t care—”
Thanquil’s hand shot out and grabbed the man by his tunic, pulling him closer. Thanquil was far from being tall, but he seemed to tower over the man. “Be careful what you say, old man. We are not all the same. Arbiter Prin over there would have you whipped for calling him a witch hunter. Be thankful I am more forgiving.” He finished by giving the old man a hard shove, sending him crashing to the earth in a heap and with a yelp of pain. It wasn’t something Thanquil enjoyed, but he couldn’t allow someone talking back to an Arbiter. If he let one off without even a warning soon they’d all be talking back.
“We are Arbiters,” Thanquil hissed at the crowd. “Trained and sanctioned by the Inquisition.” He let his gaze sweep over all those close by and each one averted their eyes. Then, disgusted with himself, he turned and stalked towards Arbiter Prin.
“You let him off lightly, Arbiter Darkheart,” Prin said in his deep voice.
The young boy, still tied to the stake, was watching Thanquil through unnerving, calm eyes. There was no fear there, no anger. Then the boy smiled, only a slight tug at the corner of his mouth, and Thanquil saw the same thing Prin did, the same thing that had condemned the entire family. Darkness.
“Get on with it, Prin,” Thanquil growled, unable to take his eyes from the evil he saw in the boy. It was a terrifying thing to behold in one so young.
Arbiter Prin took a deep breath. “NOW I CLEANSE THESE UNHOLY BODIES,” his voice rang out with unnatural volume. “BY FIRE BE PURGED.” The Arbiter’s torch burst into flame, an act that would have even the most dramatic of bards gasping in awe, and he lowered it first towards the father’s pyre, then the mother’s, then the daughter’s, and finally the boy’s. Each one took only a moment to catch light and the flames started eating at the wood, growing higher and brighter and hotter with each second as the fire rushed to consume all it could.
It didn’t take long for the screaming to start. Thanquil took a few steps back and watched with a grim mask of determination. Prin joined him.
“Still think a beheading would have sufficed,” Thanquil said, his voice no more than a whisper.
“Not for the boy.”
Thanquil watched for a while in silence. After what seemed like an age, the screaming stopped, but the flames continued to grow hotter and hotter, consuming the pyres, wood, bodies and all.
“You might be right about that.”
* * *
He’d never seen a tavern so empty, even the rats seemed to be avoiding the place. Thanquil picked a dark corner of the room to avoid attention, and Prin joined him. For two hours they sat there in silence and Thanquil couldn’t say he was enjoying the company. Patrons entered the tavern and those same patrons left immediately after seeing the two Arbiters sitting in the corner like shades of death waiting for victims.
The tavern owner looked upset. In a usual evening the man would have been busy, but tonight he was serving just two grim visitors and Prin had been nursing the same ale for two hours now. At least Thanquil had the good grace to be on his fourth.
“Heading to Sarth, are you?” Prin asked. The question was so unexpected Thanquil had to check to make sure he hadn’t dreamt it. Prin was looking at him, his face gaunt and pale, his mud-brown coat stained and missing two buttons. Thanquil rooted around in his pocket and fingered the Arbiter’s button, considered giving it back, decided against it.
“Aye,” he replied. He tried to think of something else to say but came up blank so took another gulp of his ale to cover the silence.
“How long has it been since you were last in the capital?”
“Three years.” Part of Thanquil wished Prin would stop talking, that same part of him wished Prin would just piss off. “Give or take.”
“Hasn’t changed much.”
“Apart from the God-Emperor being in charge of everything.”
“You weren’t there for his inauguration?” Prin asked. Seemed he was the type of Arbiter who liked to ask questions, as if his compulsion would somehow work on Thanquil.
“No, I wasn’t.”
“But weren’t you—”
“Yeah, that was me.”
“Hmmm.” Arbiter Prin seemed to run out of questions. Thanquil sent a prayer of thanks to God and then realised the irony and almost laughed.
“Still a week’s travel to Sarth,” Prin continued, his deep voice loud among the deafening silence of the tavern. “Need some company on the road?”
“Not particularly.”
“It’s not me.”
“Shame,” Thanquil said with a roll of his eyes, “I was just starting to enjoy your company.” He bit his tongue to stop from saying anything more and then met the open hostility in Arbiter Prin’s eyes. “Sorry, Arbiter. So it’s not you.”
“A girl. Found her a month back in a village on the border. She has potential.”
Thanquil played with the button in his pocket. “She’s been with you for a month; I’m surprised she hasn’t set herself on fire.” Again that look of hostility from Prin. Thanquil decided to give up on apologising.
“She’s still a child,” Prin said, his voice little more than a hiss. “Not even in her tenth year. I would think you of all people would understand, Arbiter Darkheart.”
Thanquil took the button from his pocket and made sure Arbiter Prin saw it. Then he flicked it into the air, caught it, and pocketed it again.
“Fine. I’ll do this favour for you, Prin. I’ll be leaving at dawn tomorrow. Make sure she’s ready to travel.”
Arbiter Prin nodded once and then, with an ugly smile, stood from the table and walked towards the exit. Thanquil couldn’t help but notice the man did not pay for his ale.
* * *
Dawn found Thanquil waiting outside the tavern standing with his little chestnut mare staring at him with dull eyes, wondering why it had been taken out of the stables only to stand around waiting. Its bags were packed and yet here it waited, and Thanquil was in the same boat. He could have just left and let Arbiter Prin deliver the girl to the Inquisition on his own, but if he took the girl, the Arbiter would owe him a favour and he could use a few of those.
Prin arrived with the girl in tow. She looked young, skin still smooth and eyes still bright, a short crop of messy blonde curls hanging down from her head. She hurried along behind Arbiter Prin, glancing up every few steps but, for the most part, keeping her gaze locked on the earth beneath her feet.
“Sorry we’re late,” Arbiter Prin droned in his deep voice. He had managed to find two new buttons from somewhere and had sewn them onto his coat. “This is Arbiter Darkheart,” he said to the girl. “Introduce yourself.”
“G’day, sir,” the girl said, her voice quiet and soft. “My name is—”
“I really don’t care,” Thanquil interrupted her then turned to Arbiter Prin. “She’ll be walking.”
“Aye, she’ll do fine.”
Thanquil looked at the girl. She didn’t seem to own anything, just the rags that passed for clothing on her back, a sturdy-looking pair of boots, and the interesting glint of a silver chain around her neck. A necklace of some sort, a keepsake maybe.
“You owe me, Prin,” Thanquil said. All he received in return was a horrific smile. With that he turned and walked away, the girl hurrying to keep up behind him.
George (verified owner) –
I was a little trepidatious about my first foray into the word of self pub but once you’ve exhausted what’s available in the mainstream you need to dig a little deeper! I was intreaged after reading an interview and review for a later book in the series on Grimdark Magazine and I’m honestly so glad I did as I found the story and characters of The Heresy Within to be immediately engaging and interesting. I was coming off a book called Malice which I really struggled to get into and care about the characters or events but I was instantly rooting for all 3 of the PoV characters here. Don’t be a snob, read this book you’ll probably enjoy it! I’m definitely going to finish the series!